Firstly I should`ve updated with this first image yesterday 
I threw togeather a quick pose to start me off.
As you can see there are obvious problem areas like the shoulder, waist and head which all need adjusting, as well as the overall shape of the body.
Below is the reworked version. I fixed the shoulder and filled out alot of the deformed areas as well as building in a little more definition. I also altered the pose of her left hand and head too…She still needs a little more work, but I am happy with the way she is coming along.
